In finland women have basically the same rights and benefits as men.
We think that In real life women don`t get as much pay as men. And usually women are on maternity leave at least couple of years.
All women have right to do their own decisions att the work and the life in general. For example mine and mia`s mommys are so different life:
Mia`s mom are is a working women and Emmi`s mom are housewife. Our mommys are so different in many ways but so same too. Their both are crazy about nut chocolate and coffee.
In Finland, women can work and create a career. Many women want a career in addition to children and some families end up in the settlement that the man stays at home with the children and woman go to work. But most often leads to a solution in which a woman is at home with children for about first three years and then woman goes back to work and the child placed in kinder garden.
So women can do just as they want without asking anyone permission.
By. Emmi and Mia
There are no polar bears in Finland 
Contents: Very good
Personal and funny, that part about your mothers is endearing and well-written. However, the ending is a little abrupt, perhaps you could have summed up your thoughts a bit more thoroughly. You have challenged yourselves here, good job!
Media / appearance: Satisfactory
No pictures of your moms or are they not ready to go public on the internet ? 🙂 Still, you could have added a poll or any picture of Finnish women… Or video!
Grammar: Satisfactory
– A couple of years
– THE right to MAKE decisions
– for example, OUR mothers have very different lives
– Mia’s mom IS a career woman, Emmi’s IS a housewife
– mommIEs
– so SIMILAR
– the child IS placed (PASSIVE!)
Any pictures? Or perhaps you could insert a poll (mielipidekysely)?